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Poppy
This December was one to remember
Awaiting a new family member
A pretty lady will soon appear
To make our lives less severe
Christmas has passed and and news has come
The Mom has been admitted with a lot less glum
The the 29 th day has come with joy and pride
As Poppy appeared by her side
What a beautiful girl she will be
A great granddaughter we now can see
A Christmas present we will always remember
No month greater than this December
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Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-02-08 06:16
Congratulations!!
My wife delivers babies! I wish you and your family so much joy.
Great job,
Tim