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QUANDARY

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2022-08-20 22:20

Life is always in a state of quandary
what to or what not to do
some one wants the love of life
most want money
many force you
into a quagmire
do it or else...

How should one evolve
out of such a fluid stage
accept rage
or pass off this living page

Just can't think any way
they want with us to secretly play
life simply ebbs away
how much to or not openly display

who can come forward and say
may

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Triskelion

Sat, 2022-08-20 23:57

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true satisfaction comes from improving the lives of less fortunate people that they can share some of the luxuries we may have experienced ourselves. Your unique curiosity and perspective of life is always enjoyable for me.

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

lovedly

Sun, 2022-08-21 18:13

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I compose out of the blue
for real poets like you

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Ray Whitaker

Sun, 2022-08-21 14:28

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Sorta accusatory too. Nice poem, Lovedly.

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