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In Search of Her Still

In Search of Her

I walk daily sloppily
walking down my nearby lanes

in search of her
she promised to look for me
If I did look for her

has she forgotten those lovely kisses
sweetened roses
pinkish cheek I now miss
ah lovely words
so far still unheard

ere the dawn
sunset night betwixt

love again begins
does she know it

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

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22222222222222222 so I must thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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R A

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Aw, Lovedly,
This flows over and over with emotion. Stirring poetry.
Lav

Lav
let my poetry all stir

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Sigh this is beautiful.

Sorry I'm late I've been busy if you read my latest you will see what I've been doing.

Bravo!!!

Love and biggest hugs Sis xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

I know you are busy
............howz the concussion..........................

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Good and the black eyes are fading lol hugs

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

nor can you evade
stand in the shade
you are to all of us
here elevate
ah made

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I will not fade i am back and I'll be here more this week I am less busy (I hope fingers crossed)

Love and biggest hugs Sis xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

If I keep my fingers crossed ....how will I compose a poemy
for baby sis lol

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Thats sooo sweet thank you darlin' biggest hugs xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Life is that swimming pool where all love to swim and stay cool even when all alone why moan no one will come to help you love iis the only medicine a panacea for all lovers too and life swimming safe to the shores must pursue being lead by the bestest poetess Ausie Sis you

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Kindly words eloquently arranged of love just consummated after years of pining

hope you enjoyed with your maiden.....comments ..lol

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