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Sunku 6
Muse of my muse
Come hither
Awaken
Purple clouds
Dark tide
Rolling in
Hold me
Shake thoughts
Restless head
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Comments
IRiz
Sun, 2018-02-25 17:27
Sounds like a beginning of a
Sounds like a beginning of a Greek Tragedy.
IRiz
lonlyhrtsclub13
Sun, 2018-02-25 17:28
It does
Doesn't it....could be some future storytelling now that I can post again.
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
weirdelf
Mon, 2018-02-26 23:05
The form has been established
3 verses, each verse 2/3/4 syllables. But very good
https://vocaroo.com/i/s1rfYBZ9xeQ8
cheers,
Jess
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