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What is LOVE
She asked me
if I did love (her)
I asked (her) to first define
LOVE
She smiled
and
left me for ever
with another...
Her intentions were obvious
she was just
another unqualified lover
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
tyro
Mon, 2018-07-30 14:48
Loved
Love is the most powerful that can exist in the world. Loved your poem.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
lovedly
Mon, 2018-07-30 16:59
thank you tyro
I was wondering if you had forgotten me
thanks for the delightful comment