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I Love "Jess" Weirdelf Helps Me Write"
I Love "Jess" Weirdelf Helps Me Write"
Poetry is in my veins give me a chance to explain,
Although (Jess) Weirdelf remarks in the context of reason
I'm appreciative to his remarks it gives me a reason to believe
take a hold of yesterdays news a given chance to sing the blues
look deep longer in the peak with words suffice another chance to roll the dice
together we can clear up the false facts a reason to over react,
Poetry makes you truly think of where it goes to make one shine
the benefits of a great design worth the effect to shine
as if golden nuggets of thought throughout th force
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
weirdelf
Sat, 2018-11-24 07:09
I feel soiled
excuse me whilst I go take a long bath.
cheers,
Jess
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chevyvent
Wed, 2018-11-28 11:00
I love you Weirdelf
You are a nice man thank you for everything you do.
Mario Vitale