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The Morning After
Well who would have guessed
I would be in this mess
there's a ring in his ear and a tattoo on his chest
three's a drum in my head,who's this guy in my bed
if this isn't a dream I'd be better off dead
Can someone tell me how it all began
when I made a promise not to do it again but just look at what's standing right by my chair
tall dark and handsome
tight jeans long hair
Now who would have guessed ,I'd be in this mess
there's a beard on his face that goes down to his chest
is that his bike outside, was I taken for a ride
if this isn't a dream,where's the gun let me die
stayed out last night till three or four
I was feeling kind of lonesome
or maybe kind of bored
should have left when I wanted
should have seen what he was
what I saw was Adonis
what I got was much worse
So who would have guessed
I'd be in this mess
what I thought was a ten was a four at best
there's a drum in my head.who's this guy in my bed
if this isn't a dream,I'd be better off dead
Comments
c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-06-13 07:16
Teddy
Thank you I will make the correction
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lovedly
Sat, 2020-06-13 04:25
I would in this mess nice but ...
I think
u missed a
B
I would(be) in this mess
c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-06-13 07:17
lovedly
Thank you
will check
Chrys
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lovedly
Sat, 2020-06-13 08:09
yours too lynn on me/my poetry my/creative compositions if felt
Let your mercy spill on all those
burning hearts in hell( L.Cohen)
Geezer
Sat, 2020-06-13 10:45
Damn girl ! ...
You sure know how to make mess. You want Killer to come and get rid of him? He doesn't have to kill him, just scare the Bjesus out of him. I thought this was a great piece of imaginative writing, [How much is imagination?] Loved it! ~ Gee.
.P.S. Fix that long line.
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c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-06-13 14:25
Gee
Thank yu lol your coment was funnier than the poem
psssst all of it is imagination ahem
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