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TULIPS - MY VALENTINE POEM
Tulips – two lips -
Not too far apart,
Make a magical lure
For one lonely heart
But better by far
Than two lips apart
Would be four lips
Pressed close to
Two beating hearts.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Well I'll be jiggered!
See poem number 40 in the following list!
https://ozofe.com/top-poems/best-tulips-poems/
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Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2022-02-14 12:28
very nice tulips
the whole day I spend in Victoria Gardens
where tulips only invite in varying positions
a good HAPPY VALENTINE DAY poem
Congrats you found one
a pair at least one
Geezer
Mon, 2022-02-14 15:38
Nice lure...
for a lonely heart. The pursing, pouting of twolips so close together surely will bring all four to the fore.
Happy Valentine's Day. ~ Geez.
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Entend2u
Mon, 2022-02-14 23:03
Thank you for your comments -
Thank you for your comments - unfortunately the tulips didn't do it this time.
Entend2u
Tue, 2022-02-15 11:19
Thanks Mark. Will
Thanks Mark.
Will
lovedly
Tue, 2022-02-15 22:52
You skipped me
or missed me
Tulips here are lovely
like WORDSWORTH'S
Daffodils
Entend2u
Fri, 2023-04-07 05:38
Missed you - so I did
Somehow - I don't know how - sorry.