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Glass Slipper
Surely your poem
was written just for me
because
when I slipped it on
it fit perfectly
and I was transformed
into all the magic
I always wanted to be
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
For the Poets...
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Seren
Wed, 2023-03-01 11:58
Dearest L
Sigh your writing of late has been superlative.
It's a real privilege to read your poetry. And a joy for me.
Brava!
I hope the magic in all of us rubs off.
Much love Jayne xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Lavender
Wed, 2023-03-01 20:55
Hello, Jayne,
I have REALLY enjoyed reading a lot of poetry lately, your beautiful words included. The inspiration has been invigorating!
Much love,
Lxxx
RoseBlack
Wed, 2023-03-01 15:21
I love this
Makes me think of Cinderella but instead of the glass slipper, she is wrapped in words. Beautifully done.
~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Wed, 2023-03-01 21:00
Hello, Carrie,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and your touching poetry!
L
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-03-01 17:12
This is one of the most well timed things
Great job. The title and theme are very congruent. I like the brevity, the point comes across very clear despite the duration.
Awesome
Tim
Lavender
Wed, 2023-03-01 21:06
Thank you, Tim,
I'm glad you liked this. And thanks for sharing all your wonderful "magic"
L
Lavender
Thu, 2023-03-02 09:22
Hello, Mark,
So much to love and learn by reading everyone's poetry. Very inspiring.
Thank you!
L
Entend2u
Thu, 2023-03-02 03:51
Oooooh!
........give me more Lavender - but don't share them - just send them to me and I will write you whatever it takes!
Lavender
Thu, 2023-03-02 09:25
Good morning!
Poetry truly does transform our thoughts, and then transforms us. I am enjoying all the magic here! Thank you for reading and sharing!
L
Lavender
Thu, 2023-03-02 09:27
Good morning, Kat,
I agree - words are powerful. Thank you for reading and sharing your powerful poetry.
L
Candlewitch
Thu, 2023-03-02 07:19
dear Lavender,
I love your title and theme! the message is so very lovely. the poem; simple and sweet. you are a breath of fresh air!
*love, Cat
we are our poetry!
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Lavender
Thu, 2023-03-02 09:29
Hello, Cat,
It's always so good to share the love of poetry, and I appreciate you sharing yours.
Thank you!
Lx