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Ho, Ho, Hold On!
Santa
Nearly
Overturned
While
Sleighing
Through
Ominous
Reckless, rolling, rumbling, roaring, ransacking
Mayhem!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Wed, 2023-12-06 05:18
This is fantastic
I absolutely love what you did with this challenge. The added humor made my early morning! I can just see the sled tumbling and turning and the chaos that ensued as a result. Great job.
~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Wed, 2023-12-06 15:10
Hello, Carrie,
Poor Santa! Thank you for reading - glad you felt the chaos!
L
Ruby Lord
Wed, 2023-12-06 08:13
Loved it, great fun, Ruby :)
Loved it, great fun, Ruby :) xx
Give and grow - let's raise our verses together. I'm happy to comment on your work and appreciate a comment on mine.
Lavender
Wed, 2023-12-06 15:11
Hello, Ruby,
I had fun writing this!
Thank you for reading!
L
Geezer
Wed, 2023-12-06 10:20
This certainly...
got my smile machine going this morning! Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Lavender
Wed, 2023-12-06 15:12
Hello, Geezer,
I'm glad it made you smile!
Thanks for reading!
L
Candlewitch
Wed, 2023-12-06 10:23
WOW!
what an amazing Acrostic!!!
*hugs & holiday cheer, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Lavender
Wed, 2023-12-06 15:12
Hello, Cat,
Thank you for reading and sharing your sweet comment!
L
Unca Fez
Tue, 2023-12-12 21:42
Reminds Me of A Song...
This reminds me of a song: Grandma Got Run Over By A Reindeer! Fun. Good job.
Thanx,
Steve
Lavender
Tue, 2023-12-12 21:56
Hello, Steve,
Yep! "As for me 'n Grandpa, we believe!" It was probably during a storm - of some sort!
Thank you for the chuckle!
L
Tawny023
Thu, 2023-12-21 13:41
Holiday mayhem
Reading this was saying ‘wow that escalated quickly’ lol felt myself actually tumbling
Tawny023
Thu, 2023-12-21 13:42
Holiday mayhem
Reading this was saying ‘wow that escalated quickly’ lol felt myself actually tumbling
Lavender
Thu, 2023-12-21 18:16
Hello, Tawny,
What a crazy ride a snowstorm can cause!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
L
William Lynn
Thu, 2023-12-21 16:31
IT'S SMILE TIME! Thanks for
IT'S SMILE TIME! Thanks for sharing. - Will
Lavender
Thu, 2023-12-21 18:18
Hello, Will,
I'm so happy you enjoyed this little ditty. Bit of rambunctious fun!
Thank you for reading!
L
Lavender
Tue, 2024-01-02 16:45
Thank you, Mark!
Quite a lot of fun with this one!
L