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F E M A L E: Mannuz [Runic Symbols]
When Adam sought a companion, God gifted him a Female
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raj
Tue, 2018-08-14 14:09
Hi Rula
Nice one this relating to the legendary first female on this earth...
to make it shorter how about "sought" instead of "asked for"? ...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Wed, 2018-08-15 03:57
Thank you raj
Yep! I like sought better. More powerful!
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