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Jack In The Corner

Submitted by Depressed 1 on Mon, 2022-10-03 01:55

Jack sat in a dark corner all by himself
Everyone he has ever loved has now left
The wax candle light is starting to fade
Like Jack's memories, the wax is melting away
Soon Jack will be in the dark, completely
Soon Jack will no longer be able to see
Jack fell into a deep hole a long time ago
Into a place where light does not flow
Jack sits now in a dark corner, all alone
With a depression, he has always known

Review Request (Intensity): 
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft
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Not Explicit Content
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