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Just a Thought
There's a poem
in everyone's bag
that speaks of dreams,
wishes and prayers,
Release it.
Style / type:
Free verse
Last few words:
Just a thought...
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rula
Mon, 2021-01-25 13:31
Hello Teddy
Thank you for reading and sharing your priceless thoughts. The title just reflects the idea that this is not in any way a poem, or _this is what I thought_ but I'll spare your title for sth that is more wise in the future to deserve it.
Now the ending, mmmm, are you saying that the word release is not properly used?
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chima ononogbu
Mon, 2021-01-25 14:21
True
The world is an ocean of poems and we must draw from it.
Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.
Rula
Thu, 2021-01-28 09:32
Chima
Always great to get a new friend reading my words.
Always appreciated.
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Lavender
Mon, 2021-01-25 16:00
Just a Thought
Hi, Rula,
Calming. Soothing. Affirmative. Very zen. I rather like the last line as it is...a very peaceful, slow and deliberate release.
Thank you,
L
Rula
Thu, 2021-01-28 09:34
Dear Lavender
Your commrnts really bring happiness up to my home.
All the respect dear sweet friend.
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Asche Keegan
Wed, 2021-01-27 02:02
Dear Rula,
As Lavender said, this was very relaxing and soothing to read, and I liked the flow! Great work. :)
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Rula
Thu, 2021-01-28 09:37
Hello dear
As I said, always appreciate getting new audience to read my words. I feel lucky to have you all, really.
Thank you so much
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