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Love Lost
Empty bed cold heart
only memories remain
dreams buried alive
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Rula
Sun, 2016-01-17 09:47
a good little
Poem. I think its subject make it a senyru. Whatever,
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Buddha
Sun, 2016-01-17 13:58
Thank you Rula, you are right
Thank you Rula, you are right, the subject is much closer to a Senru than a Haiku, I appreciate your review and your kind words. I am looking forward to reviewing some of yours this evening. Buddha
lovedly
Sun, 2016-01-17 11:42
still
God blessed
Buddha
wisdom still alive
Buddha
Sun, 2016-01-17 13:59
Thank you as always Lovedly.
Thank you as always Lovedly. I can always rely on your reviews. Buddha
lovedly
Sun, 2016-01-17 19:14
hope you will
read those of mine
yet unread by any
Buddha
Sun, 2016-01-17 22:14
absolutely
absolutely