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The Ride

Submitted by Depressed 1 on Thu, 2022-12-08 02:08

I hear the sound of your distant tears falling

I can feel your broken heart as it is calling

I jump onto my trusty horse, and I ride

I long to be back again by your loving side

I want to feel once again your soft lips

Feel my arms around your curving hips

Rain nor beast can slow my horse down

As I ride through dark forests and towns

When I reach you, we will never part again

As we love our love that has no end

Last few words: 
A little fantasy poem I wrote
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2022-12-08 05:19

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your poem is lovely.

*hugs, Cat

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Depressed 1

Thu, 2022-12-08 06:18

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Thank you Cat.

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Geezer

Thu, 2022-12-08 13:40

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as though a princess is calling you! I'm sure that you would be her knight in shining armor! ~ Geez.
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Depressed 1

Fri, 2022-12-09 01:35

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Thanks Geezer. Like most of my life it is pure, or is it un-pure? fantasy.

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Alex Tanner

Thu, 2022-12-08 14:25

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Love this. It's my type of Poem. Flows easy from the heart.

Depressed 1

Fri, 2022-12-09 01:36

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Thanks Alex I am glad you liked it.

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Lavender

Thu, 2022-12-08 18:03

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A bit of romance and poetic magic!
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Depressed 1

Fri, 2022-12-09 01:37

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Thanks Lavender.

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Rosewood Apothecary

Fri, 2022-12-09 10:29

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I like all your stuff. This on especially speaks to me. My wife and I are pretty hopelessly co dependent on each other. Sometimes just going to work and and being apart for the day seems like forever. I also never want to leave, and when I do I feel like I’m battling my way back to some safe place against the nape of her neck under the aroma of her hair. I feel this. Deeply.

Tim

Depressed 1

Mon, 2022-12-12 02:18

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Thanks Tim I am glad you could relate to it.

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