Well treat your poem like your building a wall every single brick or word has to contribute to the whole otherwise it would make no sense . why would you use that word if it contributes to nothing. It’s just like acknowledge a piano is there and then never use it .
The poem has to be like an arrow it has to have a point to pierce the message or idea into your readers head. Otherwise it won’t be that memorable and it won’t be effective.

Every poem every character I have written in my poems I usually see myself as them or they represent my ideas my fears my hopes.
Most of the poems I’ve written are sad or cynical. Well because I wrote those poems while in immense pain and
Through life I’ve gotten used to being alone so I yearned for a hand to hold and comfort me yet to afraid because I know nothing lasts forever but I just want something that would stay not fade away .
But that’s life it was and will never be gorgeousity .

So when they did the surgery they discovered that my tubing broke and I was having a csi leak.
So I got surgery in my head , chest and stomach.

Now the difference between the two is rhythm .
I’n poetry you have one set of rhythm and that is the syllables.
now I’m a song the rhythm of the syllables act as an acrobat trying to balance on a beam of a constant beat.

I’m going to have another brain surgery it will my sixth in these past two years . Because they believe that my shunt is over draining.

come on guys. you know how it works...YOU Don't just slap down a poem and then run off to whatever it is you do!!! in order to be a GOOD and REAL Neopoet, you read other neopoet's poems and then COMMENT on what you just read, and be supportive and helpful!!!

So Get With It!!!
from a Real Neopoet, Candlewitch/Cat

If tone effects rhythm then rhythm will effect the rhyming pattern because in poetry every thing is structured to build up to either and idea a point or an image which ever you want to hammer into your readers head. Now it depends tone
which want to rhyming the

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chapter 2 the memories of marlowe

I just joined this site recently. I have posted some poems that were written years ago. I have tried to write something new, but my mind is blank.

I take a lot of psych medication. I believe it is causing my brain fog. Argh!

I just want to have my old way of thinking. Years ago before the medication, I had poems stuck in my head. It was just a matter of writing them down. Now I am lucky to just get through the day.

It really does suck. I have a little notebook that I keep with me. It is for jotting down ideas. So far it is blank.