The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Always Hope" presents a clear and consistent theme of resilience and optimism in the face of adversity. The repetition of the phrase "When you" at the beginning of several lines creates a rhythmic pattern that enhances the overall flow of the poem. However, the use of cliches such as "at the end of your rope" and "can't handle another hit" may detract from the originality of the piece. Consider using more unique and personal imagery to convey these feelings of despair and hope.

The poem could also benefit from a more in-depth exploration of its central theme. The current structure of the poem, which alternates between statements about life's hardships and affirmations of hope, does not allow for a deep exploration of either. Consider dedicating separate stanzas to each aspect, or intertwining them in a more complex way.

Finally, the poem's use of abstract concepts like "beauty", "joy", "light", and "pain" could be made more concrete and vivid through the use of specific, sensory details. For example, instead of saying "There's light in the darkness", you might describe the specific quality of that light, or the particular darkness it illuminates. This would make the poem more engaging and relatable for readers.

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Hello, Shelby,
An uplifting poem! I like this form - each line is a separate thought, but all the thoughts together create an inspiring piece. I like the caps used at the beginning of each line, and the lack of punctuation. The poem flows so well in its simplicity, letting the reader feel the message first hinted in the title.
Thank you!
L