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Are You Busy?

To see you again I have waited for fucking ages,
In the time that has passed written lines on many pages,
Collaborated on works with popular artists and sages,
And done it all for our love not fame, recognition or wages.

Our soul-mate bond is the ultimate love truly so inspired,
So many shirtless nights working not growing bored or tired,
The meaning of our affection is a truly purer kind of desire,
Then for days falling asleep being up so permanently wired.

You’re a part of everything I feel and say, or do and think,
For nothing can overcome our immortal soul bonding link,
As I try to accurately finally put its beauty in creative ink,
Every time dying inside your heart pulled me from the brink.

Tears cried, my blood nearly shed, sweat from every pore,
Our perfect heartfelt romance like none that came before,
So the words I write here are true of loving feelings so pure,
Your eternal place in my heart is immortal and forevermore.

Even though we haven’t seen each other in many years,
The pain i felt you suffering resonated as a spirit seer,
And hardships that consumed you evoked so many fears,
For watching you feel such sorrow bought me close to tears.

As I lay by your side resonating the cold and pure despair,
I took you by the the hand and pledged your soul to repair,
Since we met a compassionate soul’s inspiration we shared,
And despite distance between us for you to this day I care.

And every time I set my goals upon a land still on higher,
I ignite a feeling within my souls heart burning in desire,
In the inspired aspirations to a perfect love that never tire,
The gateway to the dimensions above is our inner fire.

Anyway we play our games we feel this mutual attraction,
The bold impulsive move creating a creative pure reaction,
To give the heartfelt desires of the other their true satisfaction,
Overcome by the gestures not expressed in our interactions.

For a unique cosmic being of a natural infinity so purely refined,
Has within their soul a connection to the immortal and divine,
Through their natural perfect grace so perfect and truly sublime,
At night I envision holding you closest to this heart of mine.

Still contemplating the sublime nature of our spirits grace,
As the uniquest wonder and perfection of our human race,
As the pathway of the future is revealed inside Earth’s Ace,
An immortal interstellar calling of civilisations we so saved.

Journeying to other realms and to the highest of dimensions,
Perfecting our spiritual resonance unto the infinite vibration,
Experiencing in out union the most perfect emotional elation,
You are the perfect balancing to my heartfelt desires equation.

So as we watch sun drown in our jetset holidays clear ocean,
We sidestep the turbulent currents inside our hearts emotions,
Overcoming the hardships and struggles of our life’s commotion,
Connecting to the purity of our love through the auras motion.

Even though our love through words we still yet to converse,
The immortal resplendent brilliance in you I always put first,
Forever adoring your passionate heart for better or for worse,
Our pure soul attracting this affection is a love you deserve.

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