The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem effectively uses a consistent rhyme scheme (ABAB) throughout, which helps to maintain a steady rhythm and flow. The use of imagery, such as "Quiet ripples lace the still blue waters" and "Until the mosquito squadron lands," is vivid and helps to create a clear picture in the reader's mind.

However, the poem could benefit from a more varied vocabulary. For instance, the word "mosquito" is repeated often, which can make the poem feel repetitive. Consider using synonyms or descriptive phrases to refer to the mosquito, which could add more depth and interest to the poem.

The poem also seems to rely heavily on the reader's shared experience or dislike of mosquitoes. While this can be effective, it may limit the poem's appeal to readers who do not share this sentiment. Consider exploring more universal themes or emotions that could make the poem more relatable to a wider audience.

The final stanza introduces the idea of God's role in creating mosquitoes. This is a significant concept that could be explored more fully. If the intent is to question or criticize the purpose or existence of mosquitoes, this could be a powerful theme to develop throughout the poem.

Finally, the poem's tone is consistent, maintaining a light, humorous feel throughout. However, the use of phrases like "damned mosquito" and "evil fun" seem to contradict this tone. Consider whether these phrases are necessary, or if they could be replaced with language that better matches the overall tone of the poem.

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Extraordinary! I enjoyed it. Not much to critique. Simple structure. Wonderful imagery and word use as well as a straight forward rhyme scheme. Way to go

I very much liked your humorous pesky bug poem. You must have a fondness for Ogden Nash as the very funny and relatable storyline twists in your piece are similar to some of the animal antics he would have written about. I especially like your final stanza with its “why did God have to make it?” Punch ending. Great job. Thank you for this wonderful post.

yes those dang things are the bane of summer

It seems to me, for mosquitos we are just dinner on the hoof. Your verse is quite accurate in its condemnation of the stinkers. I’m another Ogden Nash fan so this was right up my alley. There was a line or two when I questioned your subject-verb agreement, but overall, a delight.