The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "I Deserve Better" explores themes of loyalty, unrequited love, and self-worth. The speaker reflects on a past relationship where they felt unappreciated and used, ultimately realizing their own value and deciding to move on. The poem effectively conveys a sense of strength and empowerment.

One suggestion for improvement is to consider adding more specific and vivid imagery to enhance the emotional impact of the poem. For example, instead of stating "I put up with so much pain," you could describe the pain in more concrete terms, allowing readers to better empathize with your experience.

Additionally, the poem could benefit from a more consistent and refined use of poetic devices. While the poem does contain some instances of rhyme (e.g., "flaw" and "draw"), there is room to further explore and experiment with other poetic techniques such as metaphor, simile, or alliteration. These devices can add depth and richness to your writing.

Overall, "I Deserve Better"

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This poem reads like it was meant to be a spoken word poem. I would love to hear you perform it :)

The regret and spark of anger are quite clear. I also see your efforts to convey alot of personal growth as the main message. Ever consider song writing? :)