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guy i love
way this guy looks n talks gets me goin crazy way i see his smile makes me say damn baby u got me in denial lets take it to another spot so we can make it finalwhen i say final i mean its for internal like were on the whole world just me n u we can swim the falls until the sky falls n we take it all in im like hey baby did they hear of the best local studio in the world they got the best fire manger in the city when they leave people say damn they all so fine like let me take to them to front of the line that one i wrote
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