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heart break
they say heart break hurts like hell but baby whats hell its just another spell comin from under the well like a wishing well but dont worry cuz we can just wish on a shotting star and let our hearts raw until we see the night of the stars cuz baby this isnt a heart break its two hearts that beat as one unto the time comes near lets not think of this year
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Wed, 2023-06-28 11:40
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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