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Submitted by M4GG0TM3NT4L on Sun, 2023-01-15 06:35

How long have I known you
I feel you in my bones,
always right behind me
I know it, I just can't see
You,
and you are so wonderful and loving
soft kisses on worn out skin
I look,into your eyes
as pure as freshly planted rye
you really love me,
don't you?
In every touch,
am I too much?
not enough?
you alway smile, reassuring
oh, and how
curing it is
your love is felt
My only wish is to melt into
You
what, I wonder, have I ever done to deserve this?
a lottery must have been won
I probably cheated, if that's the case
I haven't the right to see your face

I love you.

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Sun, 2023-01-15 10:23

The deep emotions that you

The deep emotions that you are capable of show here. I have no suggestions of how you can make this better. ~ Geezer.
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M4GG0TM3NT4L

Sun, 2023-01-15 17:30