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certainty and uncertainty
some or alot of people in the world are certain of some things like religion
but i beleive you cant allways be absolutely certain of a few things
its like walking on ice it could crack suddenly people said prayers that they woudnt die the titanic
some people are more opened minded you have to be with others cultures like music
we are pieces of a puzzle
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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Last few words:
i hope this will help people be more understanding of each other
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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