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impressions
your family when your younger but especially in your twenties and people in high school
can do a real number on your self image even more so especially what your father
especially if your a boy can make you feel less worth and your mother
tey make you feel like a chameleon or like a fox or allways make sure your friends have a postive
image of your mind body and soul be carefull who you identify with in hollywood
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i hope this helps alot of people
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Geezer
Sat, 2022-10-15 09:42
I think that you...
should make an effort to discern the difference between [your and you're] which denotes your [possessive and you are].
As to helping people, I do believe that your heart is in the right place. ~ Geezer.
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