Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
MISPLACEMENT
IT SEEMS THAT SOME OR MOST PEOPLE ARE KIND OF LOST MINDS BODIES AND SOULS.
A GENERALIZED ANXIETY' DIS SATISFACTION ' MOST INDIGENOUS PEOPLE ACTUALLY MORE SATISFIED LIKE AMERICAN INDIANS, BUT SOME OF THEM LOOSE THEM SELVES
WITH THINGS OF NATURE ESPECIALLY SNOW CAPPED MOUNTAINS; DESERT ; OCEAN
THEY SOMETIMES FORGET THEYRE WORK. HUNTING FISHING TAKING CARE OF THEIR
FAMILIES SOME OR MOST AMERICANS AND CANADIANS WISH THEY WERE IN EUROPE
CANT DEAL WITH THE HUGE SPACES
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
HOPE THIS COMPLELLS PEOPLE TO FIND SATISFYING PEOPLE AND THINGS
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.